Inland Sea

[addy]

As always I love how you are unafraid to experiment with your sounds and imagery, willing to go where your instincts tell you to go. The net results are always dreamy and beautiful. Unlike the others, i can't say the word "coercive" does anything for me (though "sad nets of coercive balladry" is an awesome line, coercive is just tonally jarring to me), but that's just my taste. The flow was nice everywhere else for me