A Moment of Eternity (Rev. 2 Nov '12)

[Wildcard]

Rev. 2 - 11-21-2012

A tickle of raspberry
buds the tongue
delighted senses yawn and stretch--
ulterior motives that lower inhibitions.

Mahogany yang's inside,
outside pallid bubbles
yin from a distant room.

Adrift

pleasantly burrowed into filthy cushions,
soaring-
like an eagle,
a drowning dog smiles.

Rev. 1 - 07-01-2012

A tickle of raspberry
buds the tongue
delighted senses yawn and stretch--
ulterior motives
lower inhibitions.

Mahogany yang's inside,
outside pallid bubbles
yin from a distant room.

Adrift

pleasantly, burrowed
into filthy cushions,
soaring-
like an eagle,
a drowning dog smiles.

Original:

A tickle of raspberry
buds the tongue
delighted senses engage
ulterior motives
lower inhibitions.

Mahogany yangs inside,
outside pallid bubbles
ying from a distant room.

Disoriented

pleasantly, burrowed
into filthy cushions,
a drowning dog smiles
soaring-
like an eagle.