06-15-2012, 08:45 PM
I can imagine Joan Baez singing something like this.Haven't you a beat too many in this line?
to hide my eyes when stabbing light pierced bloodless in to shaded sight
I by the wound sustained was... - that's a nice little refrain
I like the 2nd verse best though I struggle to imagine tears as leaden.
to hide my eyes when stabbing light pierced bloodless in to shaded sight
I by the wound sustained was... - that's a nice little refrain
I like the 2nd verse best though I struggle to imagine tears as leaden.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.