A Clockwise Direction (revised)

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A Clockwise Direction (revised)

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06-15-2012, 06:59 PM

Thanks, Billy. I meant that the rest of the poem doesn't match the last verse in terms of quality.

Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.

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A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 05-31-2012, 08:25 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Erthona - 05-31-2012, 11:13 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Todd - 05-31-2012, 11:46 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Philatone - 06-01-2012, 09:49 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by tectak - 06-01-2012, 06:03 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by penguin - 06-02-2012, 07:14 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by billy - 06-05-2012, 01:17 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by addy - 06-05-2012, 03:34 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by penguin - 06-07-2012, 10:57 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction - by billy - 06-08-2012, 10:02 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-12-2012, 08:21 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by billy - 06-13-2012, 10:54 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by Aish - 06-13-2012, 03:21 PM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-15-2012, 06:00 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by billy - 06-15-2012, 10:43 AM

RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-15-2012, 06:59 PM

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