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A Clockwise Direction (revised)
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06-15-2012, 10:43 AM
i think the last stanza has a connection to the rest of poem which leads up to showing us a physical amputation. (i'd call losing a loved one a physical thing as well as an emotional one.) it also shows us the clocks culmination of a relationship. the end, so to speak, so it works well for me.
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A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 05-31-2012, 08:25 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Erthona - 05-31-2012, 11:13 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Todd - 05-31-2012, 11:46 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by Philatone - 06-01-2012, 09:49 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by tectak - 06-01-2012, 06:03 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by penguin - 06-02-2012, 07:14 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by billy - 06-05-2012, 01:17 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by addy - 06-05-2012, 03:34 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by penguin - 06-07-2012, 10:57 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction - by billy - 06-08-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-12-2012, 08:21 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by billy - 06-13-2012, 10:54 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by Aish - 06-13-2012, 03:21 PM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-15-2012, 06:00 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by billy - 06-15-2012, 10:43 AM
RE: A Clockwise Direction (revised) - by penguin - 06-15-2012, 06:59 PM
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