06-15-2012, 04:33 AM
Hi, Tek.
I just realized you came back to this, so off with the wilting and quilting, on with the crit!
As a preliminary aside, cenotaph is a word I really like, and I once used cenothaphic in a piece of writing although I am not entirely sure it's a real form of the word.
You made me laugh twice. I am not sure what you mean by "taking the piss" because where I'm from if someone takes a piss it means they urinate. "Autistically challenged" made me laugh as well, which is probably politically incorrect, but i'm not usually pc, so I laughed again.
In an attempt not to give away too much too soon I'm going to refrain from explaining anything just yet, although I will say (er, type) that your reaction is probably one of the many reasons why I should plan my poetry out instead of frantically dropping it exactly the way it looks and sounds in my head. I honestly do not intend to be abstruse.
I just realized you came back to this, so off with the wilting and quilting, on with the crit!
As a preliminary aside, cenotaph is a word I really like, and I once used cenothaphic in a piece of writing although I am not entirely sure it's a real form of the word. You made me laugh twice. I am not sure what you mean by "taking the piss" because where I'm from if someone takes a piss it means they urinate. "Autistically challenged" made me laugh as well, which is probably politically incorrect, but i'm not usually pc, so I laughed again.
In an attempt not to give away too much too soon I'm going to refrain from explaining anything just yet, although I will say (er, type) that your reaction is probably one of the many reasons why I should plan my poetry out instead of frantically dropping it exactly the way it looks and sounds in my head. I honestly do not intend to be abstruse.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?