06-14-2012, 07:44 AM
On version 4: really like this edit. I love what you did with stanza 2 . For some reason it now reminds me a little of how the dinosaurs died out/ fought against a cataclysm. Of course in a much smaller scale. It has a nice overall vibe, I thought
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
