06-13-2012, 02:53 PM
I keep wanting to read S2 L2 as 'quilted comfort', but that may just be me, and I realize it would destroy your rhyme scheme, so I will now ignore it as you surely will as well. 
I have no crit to offer you, I simply adore this piece and shall come back and happily read it again.
I have no crit to offer you, I simply adore this piece and shall come back and happily read it again.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?