06-10-2012, 06:00 PM
sexism aside 
this poem is hard to read. The flow is off in places and the poets speak does nothing for it IMO. Rhyme also seems to have taken precedence over the quality of this piece, which though not my kind of read, would appeal to some people.
Indie
this poem is hard to read. The flow is off in places and the poets speak does nothing for it IMO. Rhyme also seems to have taken precedence over the quality of this piece, which though not my kind of read, would appeal to some people. Indie
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche