Last Parade (original back at Billy's request)

Last Parade (original back at Billy's request)

Indie

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06-01-2012, 06:50 AM

Thanks Dale Smile

I agree this isn't as strong as it could be. I think I'm just going to leave this one for a couple of days and see what other feedback I get. That and I want to get a bit of time and perspective on it before I just untangling so I don't just rip it to pieces.

"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by Indie - 05-31-2012, 06:07 PM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by Erthona - 05-31-2012, 10:31 PM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by Indie - 06-01-2012, 06:50 AM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by Indie - 06-15-2012, 08:21 PM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by billy - 06-16-2012, 10:08 PM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by addy - 06-17-2012, 12:24 PM

RE: Last Parade (original back at Billy's request) - by Wildcard - 06-18-2012, 11:39 PM

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