05-31-2012, 03:35 PM
(05-31-2012, 07:25 AM)Todd Wrote: Tectak: So, I thought about the distillation/ferment thing and decided I like vintage more than distilled maybe ferment would work better. It has a definition that would still be appropriate.Yes. I like the certainty of implication in this
Maybe:
You would have us believe
man did this to man—
truth fermented into such
bitter vintage.
It's just a thought. I'm working through your notes.
That truth is the starter and the bitter product is the result of change with time. The sentiment has another layer....fermentation is a chemical (irreversible) process, and a change which has a limit........once the process is completed, you are left with the bitter consequences.Best, tectak