05-31-2012, 01:22 AM
I put a revision up. Hopefully, it's a step forward. You all did help clarify for me where I was going.
Oh, and Dale...in my research for the piece I came across this one part where the Japanesse narrator (survivor of the first bomb) relates how the people were initially frightened of the GIs and wanted to hide the women from them, because in a moment of cultural reflection he commented on what they the Japanesse had done in China during the war. The entire event has a lot of complex interactions.
Oh well, I hope the revision is better.
Thanks all.
Oh, and Dale...in my research for the piece I came across this one part where the Japanesse narrator (survivor of the first bomb) relates how the people were initially frightened of the GIs and wanted to hide the women from them, because in a moment of cultural reflection he commented on what they the Japanesse had done in China during the war. The entire event has a lot of complex interactions.
Oh well, I hope the revision is better.
Thanks all.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson