05-30-2012, 09:48 AM
thanks for that Billy 
. I get what you mean with the "a" in the last line. I'm very particular about "the" and "a" and have been known to agonise over which to use in some instances. For this poem, I think "the" works best in the capturing of the moment.
. I get what you mean with the "a" in the last line. I'm very particular about "the" and "a" and have been known to agonise over which to use in some instances. For this poem, I think "the" works best in the capturing of the moment.
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche