05-28-2012, 02:12 PM
it looks like it's going to be completely different. can i ask if this meter works?
On the gently rocking boat I stood
in the swells of a turquoise sea;
a friendship sloop with a broadened beam
and a cabin just for me
In the world forgot, a sailor's knot
a breezy sail, the west wind's tail
and those things that make a man forget
when he's gone beyond the pail
On the gently rocking boat I stood
in the swells of a turquoise sea;
a friendship sloop with a broadened beam
and a cabin just for me
In the world forgot, a sailor's knot
a breezy sail, the west wind's tail
and those things that make a man forget
when he's gone beyond the pail