05-25-2012, 03:53 AM
Well the first two lines are ballad meter, but then it goes south quickly.
Please fix to alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and trimeter (or meter of your choice, and/or accentual verse) with a total of 4 lines per stanza.
Example:
There once was a dog whose name was Will,
he wanted to go to sea,
but he couldn't get his semen papers,
cause he had no balls!
Will view after recompile.
Ciao (chow)
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Dale
Please fix to alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and trimeter (or meter of your choice, and/or accentual verse) with a total of 4 lines per stanza.
Example:
There once was a dog whose name was Will,
he wanted to go to sea,
but he couldn't get his semen papers,
cause he had no balls!
Will view after recompile.
Ciao (chow)
__________________________________________
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.