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[tectak]

Stretched on the bed under midday light,
light in my hands—like air, bare,
barely grasping that you are not there.

Short, but rich in punctuation.

Perhaps needing more words.

Best,
Tectak

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Thanks for the quick and helpful feedback billy. I was trying to transition between visual light and weight light. Any ideas on how to better do this?

You have chosen a difficult task. There is no "model" for light.....there is only light. Though infra-red and ultra-violet are not visible to our eyes, they are visible to other species. Insects see UV, snakes can "see" IR.
What,though, are you defining as"weight" light?
Best,
Tectak;

Ooops. sorry billy. Just noticed this is your thread! Please feel free to rub me off!