Revelation

[Indie]

...harsh effluence still sounds a sigh;
angels circle round the corners of my eyes;
Death’s shadow falls over me,
I know my own mortality,
and broken is the seal,
when a poem is real.


©2012 –Erthona

Short, sharp and to the point. Thought provoking. No real nits other than "and" in the second last line. IMO it's not needed. (And yes, this coming from the chick that overuses the word "and")