Loss
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This particular poem was recently accepted here http://opencity360.blogspot.com.au/2012/...-rose.html as is.

Congratulations! Evidently you didn't need critiques!
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"Thanks Billy, I think your comment needs an edit though, Hysterical I'm a woman."

See I told you he was a woman Billy! (Billy's going to be soooo disappointed)

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
Loss - by Indie - 05-11-2012, 12:38 PM
RE: Loss - by billy - 05-11-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-11-2012, 03:44 PM
RE: Loss - by heslopian - 05-12-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: Loss - by Erthona - 05-12-2012, 08:44 PM
RE: Loss - by abu nuwas - 05-13-2012, 09:30 AM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-14-2012, 12:53 PM
RE: Loss - by tectak - 05-15-2012, 06:31 AM
RE: Loss - by billy - 05-14-2012, 01:27 PM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-14-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Loss - by billy - 05-14-2012, 04:56 PM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-14-2012, 05:14 PM
RE: Loss - by Erthona - 05-14-2012, 07:51 PM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-14-2012, 08:07 PM
RE: Loss - by billy - 05-15-2012, 05:57 AM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-15-2012, 09:17 AM
RE: Loss - by Philatone - 05-15-2012, 12:00 PM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-16-2012, 06:37 AM
RE: Loss - by Indie - 05-20-2012, 07:39 AM
RE: Loss - by addy - 05-23-2012, 11:16 AM
RE: Loss - by billy - 05-23-2012, 11:45 AM



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