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[billy]

Thanks for all your feedback, guys
Billy, would it help if I replaced both "momma"s with "mother"?
Addy, I hope I'm over-analysing it too
Erthona, in that case, once I've done some critique, I'll post this in serious

i think so. though it all depends who the character is if it's a redneck then i think momma works, if it isn't then i'm not sure. the question is. do 10 cent detectives and directors say "momma"