05-14-2012, 12:53 PM
Thanks Billy, Heslopian, Erthona, and abu nuwas for your feedback. This particular poem was recently accepted here http://opencity360.blogspot.com.au/2012/...-rose.html as is.
Oh and thanks too to Leanne
Oh and thanks too to Leanne
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche

