2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery)

[addy]

I quite like this. The real-time immediacy you introduced it with was a nice touch. Don't think capitalization is much of an issue here, you can go without it; but some of the phrasing is rather awkward and could be improved ("pieces of bodies comedied online", a few misplaced commas). Also, while I understand where you were going with the third stanza (portraying a man overwhelmed by a conflicted world) stylistically it didn't mesh with the rest of the poem... there was a bit of a leap there. The other parts of the poem were like flashes of a film reel, then suddenly it breaks into soliloquy without warning or preamble. I can't come up with good suggestions right now buy I think you need to smoothen that stylistic leap somehow. Otherwise, i find this to be one of your more effective pieces, imo