Epilogue of Love

Epilogue of Love

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#22

05-09-2012, 10:48 AM

the added unable line doesn't harm the thing for me. and the other parts of the edit though small work well.
i think this another one to be drawed in order not to over edit it. you can always do that at a later date.

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Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 12:05 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-06-2012, 06:08 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 06:24 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-06-2012, 06:53 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 07:51 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-06-2012, 11:00 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Philatone - 05-07-2012, 12:33 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-07-2012, 11:56 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by addy - 05-07-2012, 12:03 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-07-2012, 02:12 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-07-2012, 02:17 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 09:21 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 10:00 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by addy - 05-08-2012, 10:50 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-08-2012, 10:51 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 11:49 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 02:08 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 10:44 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 06:21 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-09-2012, 10:00 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 10:37 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-09-2012, 10:48 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 11:24 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:28 AM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by tectak - 05-09-2012, 04:39 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by tectak - 05-09-2012, 05:03 PM

RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 04:44 PM

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