Opening Curtains:

[tectak]

The barking bitch
births me into lancing sunlight
'lazy bastard' expletives
broadside me.
The finger, periscoped from below
a warm duvet, ignored;
with a nifty brush handle to the ribs.
She pokes the cover away
revealing an early morning
piss proud prowler. it garners
ridicule instead of passion.
'Dream on pencil dick'
Her ambivalence excites me
but not as much as my bladder.

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use of geoff's period after ribs

Billy, just great. No muse is good muse!
Best,
Tectak
Ps do you care about the punctuation or do you have other things to worry about. I do hope your pencil was/is 2H or perhaps 2HB.