Auteurs

Auteurs

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05-07-2012, 10:40 PM

Thanks for all your feedback, guys Smile

Billy, would it help if I replaced both "momma"s with "mother"?
Addy, I hope I'm over-analysing it too Wink

Erthona, in that case, once I've done some critique, I'll post this in serious Smile

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

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Auteurs - by heslopian - 05-07-2012, 08:59 AM

RE: Auteurs - by billy - 05-07-2012, 12:07 PM

RE: Auteurs - by addy - 05-07-2012, 12:34 PM

RE: Auteurs - by Erthona - 05-07-2012, 01:04 PM

RE: Auteurs - by heslopian - 05-07-2012, 10:40 PM

RE: Auteurs - by billy - 05-14-2012, 01:47 PM

RE: Auteurs - by Wildcard - 05-08-2012, 05:11 AM

RE: Auteurs - by heslopian - 05-08-2012, 10:17 AM

RE: Auteurs - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 11:06 PM

RE: Auteurs - by heslopian - 05-14-2012, 01:50 PM

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