Mother Dearest

Mother Dearest

Indie

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05-07-2012, 08:17 PM

I may have very well messed this up, but I've given this poem a complete rewrite, any advice on this new version would be great.

Thanks, Indie

"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-03-2012, 02:33 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by billy - 05-03-2012, 03:13 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-03-2012, 04:32 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Erthona - 05-03-2012, 05:18 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-03-2012, 05:37 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by billy - 05-03-2012, 06:15 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Philatone - 05-04-2012, 07:26 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-04-2012, 08:59 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-07-2012, 08:17 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 04:47 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 09:54 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by billy - 05-08-2012, 10:33 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 11:00 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 11:36 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 02:07 PM

RE: Mother Dearest - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:17 AM

RE: Mother Dearest - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 11:30 AM

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