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Epilogue of Love
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05-07-2012, 02:12 PM
Thanks everyone for your advice, I've done a massive edit, cut out the whole middle section and re-written part of the first verse, and part of the end verse which I've split. I'm not sure about it all, but it doesn't feel too bad having taken the scissors to it.
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 12:05 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-06-2012, 06:08 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 06:24 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-06-2012, 06:53 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-06-2012, 07:51 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-06-2012, 11:00 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Philatone - 05-07-2012, 12:33 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-07-2012, 11:56 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by addy - 05-07-2012, 12:03 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-07-2012, 02:12 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-07-2012, 02:17 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 09:21 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 10:00 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by addy - 05-08-2012, 10:50 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-08-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 11:49 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 02:08 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 06:21 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Erthona - 05-09-2012, 10:00 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-09-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 11:24 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:28 AM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by tectak - 05-09-2012, 04:39 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by tectak - 05-09-2012, 05:03 PM
RE: Epilogue of Love - by Indie - 05-09-2012, 04:44 PM
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