05-06-2012, 06:34 PM
Ditto on the list, repetition, however the problem for me is this remains so vague and at points seemingly self contradictory that all it conveyed was a type of disdain for things religious, or for the gullible who clutch at religion. Although it seems to never convey why the speaker has this disdain, or that it arises out of anything more than an aloof haughtiness.
Example:
"born of desperation?
of misguided yearning for iloveyous and always-es?
to be pure?"
Are these three sentences? Each line ends with a question mark as though they were, but the last two are not complete sentences. It just seems like so much sound and fury, but in the end...?
Dale
Example:
"born of desperation?
of misguided yearning for iloveyous and always-es?
to be pure?"
Are these three sentences? Each line ends with a question mark as though they were, but the last two are not complete sentences. It just seems like so much sound and fury, but in the end...?
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.