05-04-2012, 07:15 AM 
	
	
	
		That's a good way to put it. If the poem changes because you incorporate my suggestions, then you are the one changing it, not me. 
Dale
	
	
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
	
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

 

 
