Haiku #1
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yes you can. that's what workshopping is partly about.
you put something up and people help you sort it out.

dale changed it to something you like. you now say or imply it's dales poem: there's your answer then, change a bit of his poem and make it your own. say thanks dale but i prefer it this way, your input did help though.

it's what editing is really all about.
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Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-02-2012, 09:06 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by billy - 05-02-2012, 09:39 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-02-2012, 10:25 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by billy - 05-02-2012, 10:29 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by addy - 05-02-2012, 06:16 PM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-02-2012, 11:19 PM
RE: Haiku #1 - by billy - 05-03-2012, 03:29 PM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Erthona - 05-03-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-03-2012, 11:10 PM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Erthona - 05-04-2012, 12:53 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-04-2012, 02:07 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by billy - 05-04-2012, 05:51 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-04-2012, 06:29 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Erthona - 05-04-2012, 07:15 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 05-04-2012, 07:43 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by TwistedAngel - 10-14-2012, 06:27 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by Wildcard - 11-22-2012, 11:07 AM
RE: Haiku #1 - by billy - 11-22-2012, 11:30 AM



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