05-03-2012, 04:26 PM
How about making the second line reflect the first...color wise that is.
snow cloud in blue sky
rice paddy in cobalt pond
a time to daydream
I think "cobalt" can act as the kireji.
Just a thought.
Dale
snow cloud in blue sky
rice paddy in cobalt pond
a time to daydream
I think "cobalt" can act as the kireji.
Just a thought.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.