04-28-2012, 09:25 AM
(04-25-2012, 10:54 AM)Heslopian Wrote: Thanks for the feedback, abu and billyThey don't call them ''working girls'' for nothing; she had probably had a busy day, and was hungry--- but the image of sticking out a hand while he was furiously having the greatest time of his life, and grabbing a chip or two, dunking ketchup and popping in her mouth while it was free, does have something about it, doesn't it? What a long journey...malt vinegar to crack cocaine...It's called Letter because I pictured it as a letter pushed under the door by the speaker. I'll call it something else if I can think of a more imaginative title
abu, she ate fish and chips while he was on top of her? Wow, talk about distancing!


It's called Letter because I pictured it as a letter pushed under the door by the speaker. I'll call it something else if I can think of a more imaginative title