Letter
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(04-25-2012, 10:54 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  Thanks for the feedback, abu and billySmile It's called Letter because I pictured it as a letter pushed under the door by the speaker. I'll call it something else if I can think of a more imaginative titleBig Grin
abu, she ate fish and chips while he was on top of her? Wow, talk about distancing!
They don't call them ''working girls'' for nothing; she had probably had a busy day, and was hungry--- but the image of sticking out a hand while he was furiously having the greatest time of his life, and grabbing a chip or two, dunking ketchup and popping in her mouth while it was free, does have something about it, doesn't it? What a long journey...malt vinegar to crack cocaine...Sad
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Letter - by heslopian - 04-23-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: Letter - by billy - 04-24-2012, 09:57 AM
RE: Letter - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:24 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-24-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: Letter - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-24-2012, 10:20 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 12:47 AM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-25-2012, 02:49 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 04:20 AM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-25-2012, 06:57 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 08:31 AM
RE: Letter - by abu nuwas - 04-25-2012, 08:43 AM
RE: Letter - by billy - 04-25-2012, 10:21 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 10:54 AM
RE: Letter - by abu nuwas - 04-28-2012, 09:25 AM
RE: Letter - by billy - 04-25-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: Letter - by addy - 04-26-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-28-2012, 12:25 PM



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