04-24-2012, 01:36 PM
tec
-your words are kind; thank you for them! I'm considering blending the lines together as you suggested; even if I don't edit here, I may do so in my own document. something to think about. I do like how they reinforce the ringing of a phone, though. appreciate your time.
billy-
will have a look; at the moment, am tempted to keep as is. I'm glad you like the structure; know I'm never interested in churning things out just for the sake of writing!! yeah, i have had quite a few couplety-ones recently, though I think I'm breaking from it slowly.
glad you liked the ending; thanks for the time!
-your words are kind; thank you for them! I'm considering blending the lines together as you suggested; even if I don't edit here, I may do so in my own document. something to think about. I do like how they reinforce the ringing of a phone, though. appreciate your time.
billy-
will have a look; at the moment, am tempted to keep as is. I'm glad you like the structure; know I'm never interested in churning things out just for the sake of writing!! yeah, i have had quite a few couplety-ones recently, though I think I'm breaking from it slowly.
glad you liked the ending; thanks for the time!
Written only for you to consider.