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04-24-2012, 01:28 PM
The popping in the penultimate stanza is from the blouse's buttons being undone. I think I will remove the comma after "paneling." Thanks for the feedback, Philatone
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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RE: Letter - by billy - 04-24-2012, 09:57 AM
RE: Letter - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:24 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-24-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: Letter - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-24-2012, 10:20 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 12:47 AM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-25-2012, 02:49 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 04:20 AM
RE: Letter - by tectak - 04-25-2012, 06:57 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 08:31 AM
RE: Letter - by abu nuwas - 04-25-2012, 08:43 AM
RE: Letter - by billy - 04-25-2012, 10:21 AM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-25-2012, 10:54 AM
RE: Letter - by abu nuwas - 04-28-2012, 09:25 AM
RE: Letter - by billy - 04-25-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: Letter - by addy - 04-26-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Letter - by heslopian - 04-28-2012, 12:25 PM
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