04-23-2012, 10:18 AM
Your imagery really is superb... there's something elegant yet at the same time almost primordial about how you put it together; powerfully symbolic. The only thing I would've personally done different is use "stringing" instead of hanging in S3L5 only because I like alliteration 
, but that is hardly a nit and only a matter of personal style. It is superb the way I see it now.
, but that is hardly a nit and only a matter of personal style. It is superb the way I see it now.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?