04-21-2012, 02:40 PM
thanks for the quick read and positive words, aish. really appreciated them!
while not suggested or mentioned, i tried a slightly revamped version that cuts out the extraneous "thats" while hopefully keeping the emotion.
while not suggested or mentioned, i tried a slightly revamped version that cuts out the extraneous "thats" while hopefully keeping the emotion.
Written only for you to consider.