04-20-2012, 08:40 PM
(04-13-2012, 12:35 PM)billy Wrote: hehe,Thanks billy.
i seriously enjoyed it,
my ex used to run a chippy
This written on the day.......and by gum she doesn't sweat much for a fat lass.
(04-20-2012, 11:55 AM)Erthona Wrote: The pace of the first several lines seems a bit slow. Got lost a little in the middle, and thought you were getting a haircut. Good ending.Hello Dale,
Dale
Good to hear from you. I have been a bit remiss of late, carpe diem and all that....just back from a jaunt to the west country. Not inspirational by any means but great fish and chips. I imagine you would be a little challenged by the technicalities of chip shop protocol but I am sure billy will elucidate.
Best,
tectak
(04-20-2012, 01:39 PM)popeye Wrote: Very much enjoyed the description Tectak, fish 'n chip shops one of my favourite places and so are sea beds between haddock hips, what a great ending, cheers!Ahhhh...the innuendoes are like italian suppositories tucked up on the incontinental shelf!
Filth...thats what it is.....all filth!

But I like it.
Thanks for your comments.
Best,
tectak



