04-20-2012, 11:55 AM
The pace of the first several lines seems a bit slow. Got lost a little in the middle, and thought you were getting a haircut. Good ending.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.