04-19-2012, 12:57 PM
hey jmn
the lines are here. at the same time, the sheer quantity of them seems to do the poem a disservice when written. spoken, I could see the piece having more of an impact. written, it strikes me as a kind of list.
the lines are here. at the same time, the sheer quantity of them seems to do the poem a disservice when written. spoken, I could see the piece having more of an impact. written, it strikes me as a kind of list.
Written only for you to consider.