Flavours

[Chaotic Body]

i'm seeing some kids at the movies. looking back at the piece, I think the first stanza could potentially be cut. the middle stanza felt a bit cryptic. the last stanza really offers the most meat in a rather effective way.

Thanks again for so much input

I'm trying to describe the sensations of these things, how they can be enjoyed more in the right mindset. Too vague with the title and the middle stanza, then. It might not be something easy to paint in poetry at all, eh... I'll come back to it though.

Yeah basically you could enjoy the cinema once every week but that takes away from the special moments and atmosphere it can have as a rare treat. Should work that in..