Flavours

[Philatone]

hey chaotic! hope this finds you well

Some people know well, ...could drop the comma
How to enjoy life.

Different flavours,
Mind's able to pull-...again, I would drop the comma above and the dash here
From: keen composed room, ..."keen" describing room? not sure I follow
Blanketed in dark--..."dark" would work better as a noun I think

Silence shared: unspoken rule; ...again, not fond of the punctuation used here
Some risking popcorn crunches or,
Occasional giggle, arm bending for-
Smuggled candy goods. ...now these 3 lines my mind can work with and imagine. i liked

i'm seeing some kids at the movies. looking back at the piece, I think the first stanza could potentially be cut. the middle stanza felt a bit cryptic. the last stanza really offers the most meat in a rather effective way.