04-17-2012, 11:39 PM
(04-14-2012, 04:19 PM)Philatone Wrote: I found the second stanza stronger than the first (the "gore my heart" and "hollow grays" were too much for me). Without more details given about what happened to the speaker, I don't have anything to base a connection to the speaker on.Yeah I agree with this, I can imagine reasons why this person is living alone? Is that what's running through this? Depression? (lying in at 11, hungry)
I say that because the first stanza for me is trying to put together an image, and the grays I assumed meant everything outside, not just the sky's actual colour although that may join, is bland and uninviting.
I really do love how I thought the second stanza was thinking over some internal behaviour of anger.