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04-16-2012, 05:38 AM
(04-16-2012, 05:12 AM)tectak Wrote: you cannot just leave out a word because it does not permit a reasonable rhythm to exist.I don't understand In songs, I know -just as in poems- you can leave a word off the end of a line or lyric, if the first thing that springs to mind fits I think it's nice Thanks for the input! I'm mulling over it |
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(adult themes) If I - by Chaotic Body - 04-16-2012, 04:30 AM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by tectak - 04-16-2012, 05:12 AM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by Chaotic Body - 04-16-2012, 05:38 AM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by tectak - 04-16-2012, 07:21 AM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by addy - 04-16-2012, 12:40 PM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by Chaotic Body - 04-16-2012, 09:29 PM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by billy - 04-17-2012, 10:41 AM
RE: (adult, dark, suicide) If I - by addy - 04-18-2012, 11:29 AM
RE: (adult themes) If I - by rayheinrich - 04-16-2012, 06:13 AM
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