drought
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I liked the idea of it guiding me in groups of 4 lines
("To a ceremony" is like a line of a next stanza? kind of? I like that)

The last part, I'd like 4 of those features (metaphors is not the word I mean)
Not 5
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drought - by Philatone - 03-25-2012, 01:44 AM
RE: drought - by Leanne - 03-25-2012, 04:44 AM
RE: drought - by Philatone - 03-25-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: drought - by billy - 03-29-2012, 09:48 AM
RE: drought - by Philatone - 03-29-2012, 01:23 PM
RE: drought - by Roy Hobbs - 03-30-2012, 02:35 AM
RE: drought - by Bronte - 04-09-2012, 10:39 PM
RE: drought - by Philatone - 04-10-2012, 08:10 AM
RE: drought - by billy - 04-13-2012, 01:35 PM
RE: drought - by Chaotic Body - 04-16-2012, 05:00 AM



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