04-13-2012, 09:32 AM
hope you had a nice nap! terry snored all last night! so I'm tired
obsessive-- yes I looked , changed it, and looked again at that word. I liked the Sonics of it over the inging sounds of the other
and I was not wanting it to be taken as personal by anyone. I want it to be part what it is. a wild untamed place where everything from bee, bug, plant, to me can wander in and fall in love with all its detail . all on differing levels. but picking a "wrong" word it will make some look twice, and hopefully wonder why it was picked and not think she’s an illiterate fool . and its good to make a reader work a little, find the poet mind at work.
well I am for the most part, I don’t see words as having a given place in a line, I see then as bricks that if used correctly will always shape up to the same perfect well made house that every one lives in and admires. I like to use my bricks out of order so my little house stands apart. I’m not explaining very well am I sorry ! My bad.. but luckily I know what I’m saying most of the time.
~~~ I'm glad you pointed it out anyhoo I might need to redraft to find perfection in meaning
obsessive-- yes I looked , changed it, and looked again at that word. I liked the Sonics of it over the inging sounds of the other
and I was not wanting it to be taken as personal by anyone. I want it to be part what it is. a wild untamed place where everything from bee, bug, plant, to me can wander in and fall in love with all its detail . all on differing levels. but picking a "wrong" word it will make some look twice, and hopefully wonder why it was picked and not think she’s an illiterate fool . and its good to make a reader work a little, find the poet mind at work.
well I am for the most part, I don’t see words as having a given place in a line, I see then as bricks that if used correctly will always shape up to the same perfect well made house that every one lives in and admires. I like to use my bricks out of order so my little house stands apart. I’m not explaining very well am I sorry ! My bad.. but luckily I know what I’m saying most of the time.
~~~ I'm glad you pointed it out anyhoo I might need to redraft to find perfection in meaning
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte