04-10-2012, 08:10 AM
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thanks for the time! for sure, there is anticipation, but it's not an aspect i was trying to convey specifically in this piece. do you think it would add more to the poem to have that sentiment? I though focusing on a single element would be enough without being overbearing, but i'm mistaken way too often
thanks for the time! for sure, there is anticipation, but it's not an aspect i was trying to convey specifically in this piece. do you think it would add more to the poem to have that sentiment? I though focusing on a single element would be enough without being overbearing, but i'm mistaken way too often
Written only for you to consider.