my scribbles

[Leanne]

Long future makes new twists and turns
She curses curves then sits -- love this, since in my head it sounds like "cursive" and turns the whole thing into a letter, which is possibly (as it often is) just me, but it does affect my reading
Increasing daily loosing folds -- loosening?
Where indemnity would sit -- not at all keen on two uses of "sit" in a single stanza, it's not a strong enough word to pull it off -- though you could use "stand" as a point of difference

Yesterday was here today
Tomorrows’ on his way -- tomorrow's
The day before is never more
Don’t ask for recompense -- very cool stanza

Next year had planned for everything
Hear history groan and turn -- for the sake of rhythm, I'd suggest something like "History, he groans and turns"
We spent him in a hasty way
And salt is all we earned.