The Spirit Wonders

[Bronte]

Cheers Bronte... I'm not entirely sure how creeps is less obvious than sleeps though, and I do want sleeps to pick up on the implanting dreams, so I'm going to leave that alone. I thought about changing the entire rhyme scheme there, but I decided I kinda like it.

You can always flip two lines to give distance . nothing is lost in meaning except you’d need to tweak a word or two

And yet, through garnet stains, there seeps
but whispers, words in ethered haze
a daimon voice that never sleeps

you know somthing every site that has workshops - not a one of them use strikethough. we had it 15 years ago! grrr make life easy somone!!
OK I'm alright now