sometimes i read a poem and have no idea how to reply to it, usually because i think. "is this that well done, i'm missing something" i see this poem as being a well crafted piece yet, always a yet, maybe i see it as too well crafted.
for some reason i see the 3rd and last stanza as though they shouldn't be there, like there are two different poems going on. the transition from the rich to the well written trampy/sexual don't juxtapose that well.
so while it's an extremely well written poem (something i couldn't match) it doesn't work. sorry about my confusion.
i got a laugh out of the last stanza but i felt as though i missed something elsewhere.
thanks for the read.
for some reason i see the 3rd and last stanza as though they shouldn't be there, like there are two different poems going on. the transition from the rich to the well written trampy/sexual don't juxtapose that well.
so while it's an extremely well written poem (something i couldn't match) it doesn't work. sorry about my confusion.
i got a laugh out of the last stanza but i felt as though i missed something elsewhere.
thanks for the read.