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The Spirit Wonders
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04-08-2012, 04:36 AM
Cheers Bronte... I'm not entirely sure how creeps is less obvious than sleeps though, and I do want sleeps to pick up on the implanting dreams, so I'm going to leave that alone. I thought about changing the entire rhyme scheme there, but I decided I kinda like it.
It could be worse
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The Spirit Wonders - by Leanne - 04-07-2012, 06:17 PM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by Bronte - 04-07-2012, 11:34 PM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by Leanne - 04-08-2012, 04:36 AM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by Bronte - 04-08-2012, 08:04 PM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by billy - 04-08-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by rayheinrich - 04-08-2012, 05:19 PM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by billy - 04-08-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by rowens - 08-30-2012, 02:18 AM
RE: The Spirit Wonders - by Leanne - 09-01-2012, 06:06 AM
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