04-07-2012, 11:34 PM
enjoyed. but the seeps// sleeps rhyme felt too easy. how about trying this way seems to go up and up in a crescendo.. rids of the SS sound and applied the CC.
or not!
And yet, through garnet stains, there seeps
a daimon voice that never creeps
can whisper words in ethered haze
implanting dreams of saffron days
and Clotho, reprimanded so
or not!
And yet, through garnet stains, there seeps
a daimon voice that never creeps
can whisper words in ethered haze
implanting dreams of saffron days
and Clotho, reprimanded so
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte